Death Weapon-Adrian Moretti

[Adrian Moretti]

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Green hair and Yellow-green eyes. 5’8’’ 180lbs Flippy † POSITIVE TRAITS intelligent he is trustworthy to those he knows determined to complete tasks he believes are 'worth his time' protective creative † NEGATIVE TRAITS secretive about things he feel doesn't concern others sadistic defensive blunt lazy † SKILLS Will go to great lengths to protect people he cares about (sometimes possibly too far due to his sadistic personality) plays guitar and owns many sketchbooks (always has paper and pencil on his person) Can get along with a handful of people † WEAKNESSES Gets angry quickly Tends to over exaggerate simple issues Gets sadistic when it comes to gore, fighting and revenge promiscuous when in the mood † LIKES art Italian food reading gory movies music being left alone (only occasionally seeking others when he feels like it) † DISLIKES Douchbags annoying, whiney people liars crowds (claustrophobic) Being bothered when otherwise preoccupied † HOBBIES Drawing listening to his music Watching gory movies reading † PERSONAL ITEMS Dog tags that once belonged to his father . † history "I see you're a king who's been dethroned" Past~ Adriano Moretti was born in Bolzano, Italy to his Italian father, Donato, and American mother, Alison. Though his birth name is Adriano, he prefers to leave off the accent and be called Adrian. Even as a boy, Adrian was always interested in gore and death. It became more of a comfort to him after his father passed away when he was fourteen. Not long after, his mother decided to move to Cologne, Germany as a way to ‘start a new life’. Adrian became depressed. One day during his depression, he happened upon an innocent girl being attacked by a larger man. Out of pure instinct, he came at the man with a spiked, iron ball upon each of his hands. It was the first time he had ever changed into his weapon form. That was the day he met Rose, his very own damsel in distress and future Meister. They became great friends, despite her partial lack or reality and intense fear of trust, even running away together after the truth about what they were was revealed. (He had confronted his mother who told him that his father had also been a Flail Weapon. She also told him that she had never wanted him to know the truth. In anger, he grabbed the his father’s dog tags from around her neck, ripped them off, and then ran away with Rose to the DWMA) DWMA~ Not long after arriving, both he and Rose instantly caught Shinigami-san’s attention with their rare talent, though both were too lazy to put any real effort towards academics. While Rose was blossoming her personality and putting her brain to good use, Adrian slinked to the shadows, not really wanting to be bothered. He did his work, but mostly stayed to himself. Instead of socializing, he spent his time drawing or reading while listening to his headphones. There were the days though, when he felt rather outgoing and would hit and flirt on the female population. During his time at school, Adrian almost always got into fights with other students because of personality clashes. He would get really irked when people preached that they were better than everyone else, so he would make sure to show them exactly what level they were really on by beating the shit out of them. The only person, besides teachers, that could actually calm him down was Rose. Many people said that he and his Meister were practically glued to the hip. Adrian would always deny any sort of ‘feelings’ for her and say that he was merely looking out for the girl. In reality, she is the only person in the world that he would ever truly have feelings for. After Shinigami-sama retired, his successor was quick to graduate Rose and name Adrian as a Death Weapon after he completed eating 99 corrupted souls and the soul of an elemental witch. The two are now in charge of the Western European division. Present~ They both work in the Western Europe division together, fighting the Corrupted wherever they may spawn. Usually, Rose would feel terrible about fighting, but Adrian would roll his eyes and remind her that the Corrupted needed to be destroyed or else have them destroy the world. In reality, he enjoyed her pacifisms because they were some of the only things keeping him from feeding his sadistic tendencies. He rarely visits the DWMA unless needed or taking time to visit the library with his Meister. There are times when Rose gets on his last nerves, being bubble-headed and unrational, but he makes sure to keep his calm with her because he can sense that it’s just a façade. She can be smart when she needs to be and, to him, that’s all that matters (since it’s what makes her adorable). He still tends to be very promiscuous when the mood is right, but on every other day, he stays in the background, keeping to himself. † weapons " Place your weapons by your side " † WEAPON TYPE Quad-Headed Medieval Flail Spiked Axe † WEAPON APPEARANCE Flail form: A 2 foot iron handle with four blackened chains each connecting a blackened steel ball with 4" spikes. The overall extended length is approximately 4-5+ feet, depending on how far Adrian extends himself. Spiked Axe form: 2 foot iron handle with curved blade and four 4'' spikes extending from the bladed edge. † SPECIAL FORMS/ABILITIES His Axe form can absorb energy from the air around him and concentrate it to heal wounds. [Can be used four time per thread on only Adrian himself. He cannot heal anyone else.] Able to extend his chains as far as he needs to go, depending on the enemy and/or situation. With the movements of the spiked balls, Adrian can create whirlwinds and other forms of wind storms. Depending on how fast the weapon itself can swing/move, the more dangerous and powerful the winds can be. The attacks ranges from a single strong wind blowing in a certain direction with a single swing to a powerful tornado and whirlwinds with a spinning motion of the spiked balls of the flail. He can manipulate the air around him into forming a shield against attacks against him and Rose (and anyone else he is Resonating with) [Can only be used four times per thread]. † SOUL APPEARANCE Blue-green glow with yellowish, narrowed eyes, short messy hair, frowning † formalities " Life's so wreckless, tragedy endless " † OTHER CHARACTERS none † FACECLAIM [b][color=0000FF]Happy Tree Friends[/color][/b] Flippy

[DarkWings]

Ok, before I read anymore, I have to get you to add something. Your weapon form is ENTIRELY too weak to be a Death Weapon. Your only special power is that you can extend the chains. That's nothing. When I see a Death Weapon app, I expect over the top because that's what they're meant to be. Basically, you need more power. When a Weapon consumes the final Witch soul, they gain powers that mimic, to a degree, the power of the witch it consumed. I'll just quote the wiki. "Death Scythes also gain special abilities depending on the Witch's Soul they eat. For instances Soul is able to use "Adagio of the Soul" using a net to distribute the music, because he ate Arachne's Soul. The other Death Scythe's seem to portray special abilities as well that may have deveolped when they themselves consumed a witch's soul. The witch's soul seems to increase the basic performance of the weapons normal ability thus making it stronger, some examples of this are Marie's electrical based powers, Azusa's Clairvoyance ability, or Senrigan, to see at incredible distances." That's direct from the wiki and it's canon. So for one, add another form that's similar to your flail and two, add some abilities.

If you're having trouble, pick a witch theme, then apply it to your theme. Something like Soul's "Adagio of the Soul" ability. Please fix this and post back in the notification thread.

[DarkWings]

• I'm curious about this "protective" yet "sadistic" nature you have going on. Is it one of those "I want to protect them so that I can hurt them"? or something else. They seem mildly clashing.
  
  
• this is not the first time I've seen this problem XD Positive Trait: Trustworthy. Negative Trait: Secretive. If you'd like to keep that, please put what you're secretive about. If it's everything, I don't think you'd be too trustworthy.
  
  
• Laidback and "gets angry quickly" don't seem to work together.
  
  
• I don't think being left alone is a hobby. Hiding from people, sure. But just being left alone, not so much.
  
  
• You Death Scythe ability needs to work with both forms. As it is, it reads as though it relies on there being a chain.
  
  
• I feel no true progression of time in your history. It's just... jumpy. I'd like to at least know his ages when stuff happens.
  
  
• Please leave the new headmaster out of your history.
  
  

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Edited by DelusionalxxAce?! [11/19/11]

[Delusional xx Ace]

Hello there~ I'll be reviewing this application this time~

First, remove the line that says 'Can fight without a Meister'. Every weapon can fight without their meister, so it's kind of a 'common sense', if you will. So yah, kind of no point in having that in there~ XP

Second, remove the group resonance thingy. It's not really needed and I highly doubt there would ever be a group resonance in a roleplay.

Third and lastly, the healing ability and the protection barrier ability are fine, just limit them to about four uses per thread that you're in. We don't want you to be using them 24/7~ XP that'll make you one with Mother Russia~ <3 >:3

[Delusional xx Ace]